Forgotten Temple: B2F - Story Teaser

by murasame_85 on Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:32 pm

im back with new teaser

Part 1 - Into the dark.

The night’s celebrations had left much of the Huan city of Desert
Scream either hung over or still asleep, the defeat of the temple
overlord Orca, has at last seen peace spread across the Forgotten
Ruins, teams of archaeologists had already begun work seeking treasures
of an era long forgotten.

Meanwhile 7 soldiers had camped that night just outside of Desert
Scream, the Core Alchemist Sullivan had joined them all night away from
the festivities, no singing, no dancing, no drinking just talking,
their moods darker than the night sky.

She regaled them a story of how an archaeology team had found a hidden
path during the discovery of the first forgotten temple, it is said
during the Honourable Age one of the scientists who worked in the area
had used insects and mutant creatures for his secret research.

Earlier today a team tried to rediscover this path, all but one died,
the remaining man shell shocked and unresponsive. Scraps of their
equipment where found, but the injuries of the survivor - the only clue
to what had happened.

The soldiers carried a man out of the tent, his shineguard plate armour
torn to shreds on the floor next to him; thousands of bite marks and
stings covered his body, clearly in pain he began to talk.

Repeating himself over and over he would just whisper, “They came from the dark”.

Discussing their plan all night they decided to enter this place without delay, each taking a muster card from Sullivan.

Daylight broke; the soldiers already fully equipped they used the core
technology to transfer to the coordinates provided by Sullivan.

Clearly an area inhabited by karrions the team did not seem at all
worried as they walked down the dark pathway following the muster cards
instructions.

Inside the sandstone temple a black wall covered a large stone doorway
shining and moving, INSECTS, a wall of a insects had blocked the
soldiers route, the Force Archer stepped forwards and charged her bow,
shooting a bolt of lightning at the creatures; many were destroyed but
almost instantly the hole was filled, blast after blast she fired,
fire, ice, water, lightning even the dark shadow energies did not make
a dent.

Pondering the Force Blader walked up to the stone statue by the side,
clearing some moss he laughed a quiet dark laugh, a large grin covered
his face, sliding his muster card into the slot the insects parted and
entrance was given…

To be continued...

by murasame_85 on Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:12 pm

[Part2] - The darkness awakes

The floor of the temple was covered in sand, scarab beetles moving in
and out of the loose sandstone brickwork, the torches where lit, but
there was no visible form of fuel.

The 2 Bladers sprinted off ahead to scout out the area while the rest
of the Soldiers fell in formation behind the Force Shielder. The
Corridor narrowed and so did the battle formation, broken vases scatted
the floor beetles roamed around some spitting acid but it didn’t even
dent the hardened veterans.

Suddenly one of the Bladers came sprinting around the corner, the other
flying into wall behind him almost knocked unconscious the Force
Shielder quick to react summoning a shield of shadow energy around his
allies and with the heal of the Force Archer knitting his skin and bone
back together allowing him to regain consciousness.

A large beige half insect half mutant appeared from around the corner
its spear plunging towards the Bladers head, the Blader grinned knowing
it would not harm him passing into the either through the Shadow Shield
erected by the Shielder.

Springing to his feet the slicing the creatures spear in half, the
Wizard joins him by blinking out of existence and back in next to him,
summoning a ball of fire in one hand and a ball of ice in the other
pressing them together into the creatures chest. “Goodbye” the Wizard
whispered as the 2 balls of energy countered each other in a massive
explosion tearing through its thick hide throwing it back down the
corridor, the Blader sprang off the back wall grabbing the other
Bladers hand and catapulting him towards the creature as it started to
rise his katanas slicing through its legs arms and finally decapitating
the foul beast, bloody pieces dropping to the floor.

Laughing, and now cocky, the soldiers ventured into a room, a fountain
of green liquid in the centre and a controller from the honourable age
on the wall. The key for the controller was placed in the mouth of one
of the figurines on the fountain.

Slowly the Force Shielder ordered a change of formation warning his
colleagues of a trap and he withdrew the key. Hissing and chattering
echoed around the room, the shielder span around 5 similar warriors to
the one before but larger and bright red carapaces where surrounding
him. Knowing his Shadow Shield would run out soon he slammed his shield
into the floor causing splinters of stone and energy to fly out sending
the creatures hurtling around the room, the Wizard moving to the centre
of the room, quickly froze there bodies and the rest of Soldiers
despatched them.

Another gate of beetles was the apparent way forward, the Force Blader
took the key and sliding it into the controller and manipulating the
symbols the scarabs partied.

In a V formation with the Wizard and Force Archer at the back, and the
Force Shielder at the front they marched into the corridor, ahead of
them where several ranks of the creatures waiting for them. The warrior
laughing as he stepped forwards, the other soldiers stepped aside the
Force Blader reading the inscriptions on the walls as the Warrior
walked down the corridor, standing there he waved the creatures
forwards to attack him, they accepted his offer but as they came within
striking distance his eyes blazed with fire his body swelled and he let
out a massive scream the creatures not knowing what was happening lost
there composure, their defences down he attacked a massive attack of
great destructive force spiralling through the monsters, when he
reached the end turning around charging his energies into his sword
ripping the remaining bodies to shreds with a terrible blast that
opened up the floor. Glancing over his shoulder he saw another gate of
scarabs grinning back at the force archer he drove his sword into the
floor in front of the gate charging the ground underneath, a terrible
explosion ripped through he doorway destroying all the scarab beetles.

The next corridor. was silent and long, leading into a large stone room
with 4 pillars, the sign of the scarab on the floor, but no sign of
life.

The Soldiers spread out covering each other the Force Blader checking
the alter reading the inscription in ancient archaic runes that only he
could understand, his eyes widening in terror and realisation he spun
around to see one of the Bladers stood in the centre of the Scarab
symbol before the cry to get him move could escape his lips a shadow
portal opening and 2 terrifying claws ripped the Bladers body in 2,
stepping out a create that looked half insect and half Hex Scyther.
“HOW DARE YOU DEFILE MY ALTER, I SHALL FEED YOU TO MY CHILDREN” It
Screeched. More of the beige warriors appeared, and a singular red one,
the red erecting a shield around the giant creature.

The Soldiers fast to react not even glancing at there fallen comrade
summoning there inner astral powers, flame engulfing their bodies, the
Warrior screaming, power pulsing from his body, The Wizard pure energy
crackling around him, The Force Archer summoning her pistols, The
Blader summing his claws... and finally the Force Blader directly
enchanting his body with the energies of the force.

The warrior leaped into the air his sword crashing down into the top of
the shield his sword glancing off the large purple sphere, he stood on
top hacking at it without flinching beating it with his sword, the
Blader sprang around the walls landing onto of the red creature that
had erected the barrier smashing its head clean into the floor killing
in a single blow, the purple shield dissipated and they all attacked,
bolts of power shot at the creature the lesser ones being destroyed in
the radius of the blasts, the Warrior finally landing on its back
driving his sword through its spine, the Blader attacking its legs
toppling it to one side the Force Blader rushing underneath punching a
hole through its gut, the force archer picking off the smaller
creatures around the edge while keeping the other Soldiers bodies
intact with her healing abilities. The Wizard now stepped forwards
blinking around the room appearing in 5 places at once the Blader threw
the Force Blader and Warrior out the way and a green aura floated
around him as he dodged every attack coming at him, with ease springing
out the way, a dark shadow surrounded the creature symbols circling it
on the floor time stood still in the bubble just before it collapsed
tearing the giant creatures body into pieces.

Burning flesh covered the floor and a single stone glowing in the shape
of a butterfly lay at the centre, their fallen comrades body cinders
from the fight... was it worth it?

by Miow on Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:40 am

bapak eyh panjang....aku skip ja..haha

by caer on Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:13 am

hohoho..nice murasame..

ade hint penting dlm citer ni utk access FT:B2F..aku pon x penah masuk lg, aku plan nak pegi sumer dungeon as wiz, bukan fb..

level baper ek leh masuk FT:B2F? dalam mggu ni maybe aku leh kejar smpai lvl 80..

by MusTanG on Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:53 pm

aku ada kad FT B2F simpan dlm bank.

klu korg ada rancang nk raid FT B2F. aku bereh ja. hehehe.

aku pon ada atair of Seina B1F dan B2F dlm bank.

by murasame_85 on Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:47 pm

[Part 3] - Treachery

The burnt flesh covered the room, slime and gore covering the soldier’s
weapons, a look of sheer hate on his face the Force Blader walked over
to the alter. He uttered words of an archaic language and the apposing
door to their entrance opened, looking down he grimaced “Let’s move
before someone else looses their life”.

The Force Archer laughed. “Just don’t loose your head old man, I will resurrect you.”

The Force Shielder took point, the party of soldiers pressed on along a
dark corridor, the end opening up to a large room with a skylight, moss
was hanging down the sides, ivy with large flowers climbed the side and
in the centre, a large fountain of clear spring water.

Looking up butterflies and other insects of all descriptions flew out
above them in the open air, with a single hand gesture to the remaining
Blader from the Force Shielder he sprang around the walls to crouch on
the edge to look out.

After surveying the area the Blader jumped back down and turned to the
Force Shielder. ”Sir we are in some sort of compound under the main
temple, above us is a large overgrown garden, some sort of eco system,
it seems self contained.”

”As I suspected…” answered the Wizard “This is indeed a complex built
and designed for research and design of new creatures for protection,
during the Honourable Age many built mazes to try and protect their
work, this work is of incredible design and purpose to protect
something… that I fear by now doesn’t need protecting itself more the
world protecting from it.”

”Explain!” Grimmaced Force Shielder!

”Well this research would have had the purpose of creating the ultimate
warrior mutant, imagine what the years would of produced in evolution
if the experiment was a success… and you thought Patren was bad.”

A dark mood took the Force Bladers face. “I almost lost my life during that fight, if it wasn’t for…”

”Don’t mention” it replied the Force Archer, “We have been together a
long time, its been a while since we lost a member, lets make sure it
doesn’t happen again, I think we should each use a odd circle, it will
transport you back to the core alchemist if you are about to die, they
are our last odds we cannot replace them so be careful!”

Laughing the Force Blader took the butterfly stone and placed it in a wall... “Lets move on.” He said grimly.

The next corridor wound around in a 'S' shape, no signs of life, no visible signs of traps, the Soldiers trudged on.

Entering into a large throne room, with large green marble steps, green
flamed torches lit the lower, areas and normal fire lit around the
throne.

She had purple fur covering part of her body large burning eyes, pale skin with a large smile on her face.

"Do you really think that you could leave here alive?" She spoke in a dark slow voice with a underlaying hiss.

"Of my family you seem to have slaughtered many, my personal guard
wanted to dispatch of you... but I am a woman of simple pleasure so I
decided you will all be mine."

A glow filled around her, blinking out of existance almost as she sped
up to the ceiling at a speed not even the Blader could follow. A blood
curdling scream came from behind the soldiers. They turned and the
Force Archers head rolled between them and her lifeless corpse fell to
the floor blood pooring from her severed neck.

"Only one of you will leave here alive."

Horror filled the Force Shielders eyes he looked around at the team,
the Force Blader had a big smile on his face his smile turning now into
a grin as he started laughing.

"REEVES!" Bellowed the Force Shielder "YOU BETRAYED US!"

Handing the Force Shielder a sidways glance the Force Blader looked at
him, "Sorry Sir but I have my orders this is where you die."

Many screams where heard from the passage ways over the hours, a
bloodied and worn out Force Blader walked from the entrance gripping
several Odd Circles, panting and laughing manically, his eyes burned...
His soul black.

No one has ventured into the corridors since... but maybe it is time
for more fools to loose their lives in the vain hope they will come
back.

by murasame_85 on Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:48 pm

penulis bg cite x lengkap. tgk je vid kat bawah ni.. vid derang gak ni

by MusTanG on Tue Nov 24, 2009 8:00 pm

cmne FB tu leh betray geng sndiri lak. xfhm aku.

tapi cite altair of seina tu TERBAIK.

by caer on Tue Nov 24, 2009 10:14 pm

agak2 dpt tak kita raid dungeon2 ni and wat video kita sndiri..huhu

teringin plak aku...kalo dpt pkai sume mithril and mithril epaulet masing2 pon ok gak..haha

by murasame_85 on Tue Nov 24, 2009 10:22 pm

MusTanG wrote:cmne FB tu leh betray geng sndiri lak. xfhm aku.

tapi cite altair of seina tu TERBAIK.

aku pon rasa camtu..

by caer on Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:51 am

takder teaser dari kita ke? kita leh wat sendiri..aku lantik mustang jd penulis..hehehe

by MusTanG on Wed Nov 25, 2009 9:40 am

celah mana ko nk dpt mithril epaulet tu caer? nk beli +7 pon dah 1/2 billion.

aku? tulis cite? hahaha. english aku sux la. T.T

kita mntak tlg mama zura comel tuliskan la! hihihi

by caer on Wed Nov 25, 2009 1:45 pm

hehehe..mama zura comel aku punyer, tu x boleh diperkotak katik kan dgn cabal...hehehe

nak yg comel gi cari sendiri,kekeekeke...

nanti korang dh keje, beli la chaos box epaulet..leh la dpt chance untuk +8 epaulet..

dlm vid yg jep paste ni, sume dh ade epaulet +8..agaknye kat sebe EU senang dpt kot..kat seber kita ni bary je exist epaulet tu dlm episode 3..

by murasame_85 on Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:04 pm

cite ni cite pertama penulis tu karang. sbb tu byk lubang. Seina B2f tu cite ketiga dia.. sbb tu feel dia lain skit. penulisan org yg dah "lvl up". :D

teaser seterusnya akan menyusul... The Forgotten Island..

by MusTanG on Wed Nov 25, 2009 7:49 pm

ooo. patut la. cite seina tu series best. mungkin sebab:

1. english dia mantop
2. penyampaian yg berkesan, aku leh imagine power yg org tu guna wpon aku xtau job lain slain blader dan FA dan FS
3. sbb watak utama dia nation procyon!
4. dan sudah pasti watak utama dia bladderr!!!!!

suka suka ^^

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